Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Alternate Ending for Prt. III

* Nora turns to go after explaining her reason for leaving Torvald, when the Nurse comes in from the side room *

Nurse: * talks in a bewildered voice * Uhhmm ma'am . I was told to give this note to you. * turns to go *

Nora: * opens the note and gasps *: ... This note says that Mrs. Linde talked Dr. Rank into saying that he was ill and dying so that..... Well point is Dr. Rank isn't dead. I'm going over to him.. Goodbye Torvald. * slams door creating a tumultuous noise throughout the room *

Torvald: * Stands at the door speechless. Trying to suppress his feelings *

* Nora turns up at Dr. Ranks house and rings the bell. Dr. Rank answers and invites her in with a puzzled look on his face *

Dr. Rank: What brings you here Nora?

Nora: * sits down on the couch next to him* Well.. All those things that I said about not being with you and being with Torvald instead.. I changed my mind. Before I came here * proceeds to tell Dr. Rank about what she had done and how Torvald had reacted * I thought that Helmer would understand but he didn't instead he was worried about him and his reputation and that's not love. All I've been to him is a doll in his doll house.I told him that I was leaving him because thats not how a woman should be treated and I can't live with the incompetent likes of one such as that. I need to find myself and find out what true love is.

Dr. Rank: Wow.. Nora that's quite a lot... Well I think your right about how its not right that you should be punished for doing something to save your loved one. I only have on question for you..

Nora: * moves closer * What is it?

Dr. Rank: Nora do you love me and do you think you would be able to handle being treated like a real woman instead of a doll?

Nora: Yes I do.

Dr. Rank: Well then you can stay here with me.

5 comments:

  1. Aw, this was quite cute. I loved the way you set Nora and Dr. Rank up. Good job.

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  2. Dr.Ranks loves her and treats her like a real women. Perfect ending for Nora and her new lover!

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  3. i love your ending because Dr. Rank treats nora like a real woman instead on helmer. perfect ending

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